New Web Site

[NeAl]

Finnaly, a web site. It took a while but I finnaly have one up. All my animals are up there that I have for sale. If you guys want to take a look at it and give me your HONEST opinion. Please tell me if something is mispelled. Here is the link: Thank you very much.
N & W Reptiles
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[XzyluM]

Since you asked I'll state so errors and mis-spellings [img]modules/Forum/images/smiles/icon_razz.gif[/img] On the front page you forgot to space "wekeep." On available snakes, you spelled "our" as are. Same error on available lizards page. Forgot to add a period at the end of "Don't wait" on the terms page. That's all the errors I could find. It's a nice site!
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[Reticu-Lady]

Hey, looks good.
Ok, just a little helpful suggestions, I want you to have a perfect site, so you may wish to correct a few small errors.
Front page: "Here are some top quality animals that wekeep and breed:' just need to separate 'we' from 'keep' and loose one space between 'and' & 'breed.'

Available snakes page: 'This is are available page.' 'are' should be spelled 'our.'
'Dont see what you are looking for?' 'Dont' needs an apsotophe: don't. hehehe, If you wish to get really picky, the above sentance breaks a few grammatical rules, but unfortunatly, it is fairly common 'normal' speach for modern Americans. (mostly, it ends with a preposition 'for')
ok, next: Baby Corns: Oakattes - spelled 'Okeetee' (I had to look up the correct spelling on that one, too) lol This is are available lizard page. Dont see what you are looking for? Same mistakes. "High Yelow Partial Stripe Leopard Gecko" Yellow, just forgot an 'L'
under Coming soon: Savana Monitors, I may be wrong on this one, but I thought it was spelled 'Savannah'
Photos page:
'On this page, you will find photos of some of are breeders and pets.' I belive you meant 'our' for 'are' again. (actually, a very common error)
' Female Oakatte Corns (babies due 6/22)' spelling 'Okeetee'
'Customers often ask what our return policy is' You may wish to rephrase that to something like: Customers often ask about our return policy. (just to make it grammatically correct)
'In the event when you receive your order and their is a problem,....' change 'their' to 'there.' You could also drop the 'when' and have it read 'In the event you receive your order.....'
Ok, enough nit-picking for today. I do hope you don't take offense, but I think you deserve to have your website reflect your professionalism as much as possible. You have some great looking stock. I hope you and your son have much success.
(hehehehehe, I am a frustrated English professor, I think) [img]modules/Forum/images/smiles/icon_rolleyes.gif[/img]
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Lisa ? Just an FYI.. NEAL is the son hehe [img]modules/Forum/images/smiles/icon_eek.gif[/img] [img]modules/Forum/images/smiles/icon_wink.gif[/img] Payments go to Walt , the father though. Hope ya get a darn good allowance out of this Neal ! lol
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Ok..here's a few more cents..
On your pages that list what's available..ie snakes..[ haven't gotten to the others as yet] You should list on the animals whether they are cb, wc, etc..
Also the age of the animals too.

You also have a not on the bottom left to "see our terms" page. Why not apply the word "terms" as a hyper-link to the page it reflects. [ makes it easier to navigate is all]



HEY ! Don't forget to add your link to RTB's links also [img]modules/Forum/images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img]
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[natas]

Looks nice...only missing one thing....a link to redtailboa.net [img]modules/Forum/images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img] Hehe
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[NeAl]

THANK YOU. That was alot of mistakes. I will make more changes as I go on. Tripod has this #$%^&#$%^&#$%^&#$%^& bandwith thing so my veiwers cant see it for like 2 hours. What a waist of time. Anyway, thanks for all you help and I hope you enjoy!
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[XzyluM]

LISA! Whoa, you must have spent quite some time looking at that site. I didn't actually read everything and try to rephrase it if it didn't sound right [img]modules/Forum/images/smiles/icon_razz.gif[/img] Anyways, I'm working on mine, but don't know when it will be done.
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[eddie]

Can you put Redtails link above the K/S link?

I know, I know, nitpicking now...
But the nitpicking means you are close to being perfect and we are actually searching for things to whine about! [img]modules/Forum/images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif[/img]

Oh yeah, today is the first time it would load for me, but it does look good!
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[NeAl]

Ok. I am going to put it above or maybe BESIDE.............I dont know. I will go do it now.
N & W Reptiles
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[XzyluM]

Another suggestion. Just tried to visit it and you have reached the hourly bandwidth. I would find a better host that wasn't so strict on free bandwidth usage. There is plenty out there.
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[NeAl]

I know. It sucks really bad. I think it is like 2 hours on and them 2 hours off or something. I wish they would of told me before. I spent a couple of long days working on that. Thanks
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[natas]

Hey if you want redtailboa.net to host you let us know. We are trying to get the hosting going so we will offer you a very low low price...just shoot me a email.

natas@redtailboa.net
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